Monday, October 22, 2018

"For All" Prompt

Based on For All by Gary Snyder, write about a place you hold dear. Gary wrote about Turtle Island--North America's original name--and more specific, the Rockies. To add challenge, try to use short/deliberate lines to capture the memory and make every line a shot from a camera. This is inspired by the lines such as, "cold nose dripping," and, "stones turn underfoot, small and hard as toes." The story does not need to be true, but the place does.

-Tennessee Backyard

Red clay turns into green grass.
Brothers race towards the water.
The younger one jumps in last.
They are watched by their mother.

Malinois chew on wild onion.
Later, the brothers join them
Before climbing a white oak.
Their father prepares his boat.

The river his caller, off goes father
In his truck. The boys watch a buck
From their oak tree. Breezy Sunday
Joy for all. The father shan't be long.

2 comments:

  1. Neighborhood Trail

    Down your street and to the left
    Down the steep and up the hefty
    Hill of chewed and spit bark,
    Mulch recycled from a tree's park.

    Speed down and through two houses
    Splitting the sidewalk before the dowses,
    Initials etched for the spouses.
    Look and watch for teenage louses.

    Sidestep down the hill
    Like the ice is imaginary.
    Do not run to get your fill;
    The corner beckons for the wary.

    Turn left and start straight.
    Leading to a bridge's gate,
    This is your figure eight.
    Turn back now or test your fate.

    I urge progress to the next half
    As it holds perfect a photograph.
    Discover the another 'hood parallel to yours,
    But beware of the barks; they're outdoors!

    - Your Friendly Neighborhood PanLibDem

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  2. Strawberry Hill

    You can't smell the bay from here.
    Tech-startup hipsters on benches
    commune with unsettled geese.
    Trees rise from the crispened lake
    like a pile of autumn leaves, blown

    by unexpected California cold.
    Someone is playing bongo drums.
    There are dogs off their leashes
    sniffing out new hiking trails.

    I scale the island in minutes.
    Someone has planted patches
    of mysterious, flowerless plants.
    Around the curve of the hill
    like the curve of the earth
    a waterfall traces smoothly.

    At the bottom, flat stones
    a mosaic sealed with water.
    Two mallards hold their peace.
    I sit at the bottom, looking up.

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